Note From KMW: One of the first writing teachers I remember learning from was James Scott Bell. When I started religiously reading the Writer’s Digest magazine as a young writer, Jim’s regular column always spoke to me. He had a knack for naming high-concept ideas in a way that always felt accessible and practicable. Years later, it was a tremendous honor to get to collaborate with him, as a colleague, in small ways, including the occasional exchange of blog posts. Over the years, I’ve returned to many craft concepts, but few have shaped my understanding of story as deeply or as consistently as Jim’s idea of the mirror moment in fiction.
In fiction, the mirror moment is a point—often at or near the story’s Midpoint—when characters are forced into a moment of self-recognition. It is not merely a plot beat, but a reckoning: a pause in the forward motion of the story in which characters must confront who they are, what they have become, and what the cost of continuing forward will be.
What has always struck me about this moment is how little it has to do with external spectacle and how much it has to do with the character’s internal conflict. Even as the plot escalates and the stakes rise, the mirror moment pauses to ask, “Who am I willing to be from here on out?” It’s a visual representation of the Moment of Truth I often talk as the centerpiece of character arc.
The mirror moment is such a visceral piece of symbolism. Often, the visual symbolism of the story allows characters to actually look at themselves—either in a literal mirror or in some other clever way (such as Don Lockwood, in Singin’ in the Rain, having to confront his own dismal acting on the movie screen).
Singin’ in the Rain (1952), MGM.
Years ago, Jim was kind enough to share a post with me about the mirror moment. It’s one I’ve personally thought about and referenced countless times. It’s brilliant in its exploration of how stories pivot both structurally and spiritually at the Midpoint. When writers understand this moment, the middle of a story can stop feeling like a slog and start feeling like the best part of the experience.
Today, I thought it was time to once again highlight Jim’s thoughts on the mirror moment. If you’ve ever struggled to articulate what the middle of your story is actually for, this piece offers a way to think about it that is absolutely brilliant.
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I want to thank Katie for giving me some space here to talk about my book, Write Your Novel From the Middle. Rather than have her come up with interview questions, I took that burden upon myself. The only problem was, when I questioned myself, I tended to go on and on. I’ve thus mercifully cut this interview to the bone.
I sat down with myself on a sunny afternoon in Los Angeles. I found myself to be a bit distracted that day, but dogged former lawyer that I am, I persevered.
What Is the Mirror Moment?
Write Your Novel From the Middle by James Scott Bell (affiliate link)
Me: So what prompted Write Your Novel From the Middle?
JSB: It was a discovery I made a couple of years ago, about something I call the “mirror moment.” I’ve written this book to explain not only what that moment is, but how to use it to write better novels. And screenplays, for that matter.
Why the True Midpoint Is a Moment, Not a Scene
Me: Can you be a little more specific about this “mirror moment”?
JSB: Yes, I can.
Me: Well?
JSB: Ah, okay. There are quite a few writing teachers who talk about the Midpoint, a scene in the structural middle of the novel that does an extra something. Only I was never clear on what that thing was, because there’s conflicting advice on it, and some of it’s vague. So I set about to see if I was missing anything. I took a few of my favorite movies and went to the exact middle of the films. Then I went to some of my favorite novels and did the same. What I found excited the heck out of me.
Me: Did you ever get the heck back in?
JSB: Not even close. What I found, to my utter delight and excitement, was that the true Midpoint is not a scene at all, but a moment within the scene. And not only that, this moment revealed the very heart of the story.
The Character’s Moment of Self-Recognition
Me: How so?
JSB: The character is forced to look at himself. As if in a mirror, only it’s a reflection of who he is at that moment in time.
Who am I?
What have I become?
What do I have to do to regain my humanity?
Sometimes, it’s the character looking at the odds.
How can I possibly win?
It looks like I’m going to die—physically or spiritually.
Now what am I supposed to do?
Examples of the Mirror Moment in Stories
Me: Can you give us an example?
JSB: I’ll give you two. In the middle of Gone With the Wind, Scarlett looks at herself and wonders what will become of her and Tara. What must she do to save her way of life? She makes the decision right there that she will do whatever it takes. She becomes a doer, not a victim.
Scarlett O’Hara at the midpoint of Gone with the Wind</i: a classic mirror moment in fiction, as she confronts who she has become and vows never to be powerless again. (Gone With the Wind (1939), MGM.)
In the middle of The Hunger Games, Katniss accepts that she’s going die. She states it plainly, right in the middle of the book. She prepares herself for death, but then gets a chance to fight on.
Katniss Everdeen at the Midpoint of The Hunger Games: a mirror moment in fiction, as she accepts the likelihood of death and prepares herself to face it. (The Hunger Games (2012), Lionsgate.)
Me: Interesting. Any other examples?
Try Dying by James Scott Bell (affiliate link)
JSB: Try Dying.
Me: Nice self-promotion.
JSB: Honestly, I was surprised to find it, because I had not yet formulated the “mirror moment” idea when I wrote the book.
Me: So how did it get there?
JSB: All I can say is it must have been instinct. Which is probably how Margaret Mitchell and Suzanne Collins did it, too. What Write Your Novel From the Middle is doing is popping open the hood and showing writers how they can be intentional about it.
Me: Should a writer know what this moment is before beginning to write?
JSB: It helps enormously, because knowing this moment illuminates the entire book you’re trying to write. It’s the deep tissue of the story, which many writers don’t discover until much later, sometimes after the book is published.
How the Mirror Moment Helps Plotters and Pantsers
Me: You make the claim that this method of yours will bring peace to a longstanding feud—that between plotters and pantsers. So back that up, please.
JSB: Sure. The Write From the Middle Method is powerful because it can be used at any point in the writing process. If you’re a pantser, and you want to write without a plan, you can wait a while before brainstorming the mirror moment. But then, once you do know it, your pantsing will have a focus you’ll be delighted with.
A pantser could also start with a mirror moment “out of the blue,” and then write a whole novel around it.
Plotters will love the mirror moment because they usually have a good structure set up, but don’t always know the deep, interior story for their main character. The mirror moment gives it to them. Planning scenes gets much easier as a result.
Using the Mirror Moment in Your Writing Process
Me: Have you found this to be true in your own writing?
JSB: Absolutely. Ever since I discovered the mirror moment, it has become an absolute essential for me. For example, when I’m just starting to plan a story, when I’ve given thought to my LOCK elements, I—
Me: What is LOCK again?
JSB: Why are you asking me? We came up with it.
Me: For the benefit of the readers.
Plot & Structure by James Scott Bell (affiliate link)
JSB: Ah. LOCK stands for Lead, Objective, Confrontation, and Knockout. That became the basis of my book, Plot & Structure.
Me: Nice self-promotion again.
JSB: You asked the question!
Me: Okay, go on with what you were saying.
JSB: I like to lay out my LOCK elements first. That’s when I know I at least have a plot. But then I go right to that mirror moment. I brainstorm it. I come up with several possibilities, and invariably one of them just seems right. It illuminates the entire narrative. That’s when I’m ready to write.
Me: Anything else about this book we should know?
JSB: Just that I’ve included a section with extra tips on writing the novel. Helping fellow writers is one of the things I enjoy most.
Me: Well, that about does ‘er. Wraps ‘er all up.
JSB: You’re quoting The Big Lebowski, of course.
Me: Of course. Someday I want to have Sam Elliott’s voice.
JSB: Good luck with that.
Me: And good luck with the new book.
JSB: Thanks. It’s been a pleasure.
Me: We should do this more often!
JSB: I, um, have to go now.
Tell us your opinions! Can you identify the mirror moment in the middle of your story? Tell us in the comments!
A visual metaphor for the mirror moment in fiction—when a character confronts who they are at the Midpoint of the story.
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